Being a celebrity such as a famous film star is sports personality bring problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity bring more benefits or more problems?
In this days and age, we all see that celebrity always exists in the fame and light. Some proponent claim that being a celebrity is not easy to maintain the level as conflict this perspective some experts advocate that as a celebrity they have epic advantages. I fremly advocate that, celebrity have immense ill- effect such as they can not be a normal in crowed. Furthermore, famous personality always in focus of their fan as well as other people.
To claim firs support, people are always ready to know every bit of life of the famous celebrity. Celebrity are most of the time trapped by camera as they have to be concienc when they are outside. For an example, when they go to the gym or any occasion they mostly converted in to news as they can not behave normal. In addition, some extremely famous personality having depression due to devastating news of them.
To highlight other claim, celebrity must have to be good with their fan either they are happy or sad. For an instance, everyone ready to take photograph with the celebrity who attained any function with local public. Similarly, at that moment if celebrity express their discomfort as it become suddenly news which detriment their image. Besides, that celebrity have to be a part of charity either they wat or not.
In conclusion, celebrity can have best of both words apart from that there are numerous cons such as they have to be concerned in public as well as they become always under the eye of camera. I have complete solidarity that as celebrity lot of drawbacks which famous people have to face.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
In this days and age, we all see that celebrity...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
... ready to know every bit of life of the famous celebrity. Celebrity are most of the time trapped...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'become'.
Suggestion: always become
... be concerned in public as well as they become always under the eye of camera. I have complet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72463768116 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51800906874 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.888197548 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179148580141 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773293598042 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389491890227 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127452792093 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393152404868 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.