The diagram explains the way in which milk and associated products are made. Overall, there are seven stages in the process, beginning with the grazing grass and culminating with putting the final products in supermarkets and shops.
To begin, the grass which is grazed by cows, in order to make milk. These cows are then placed into milking machine, where they are milked twice a day.
Following this, the milk are putted into refrigeration storage, where is maintained in a perfect temperature. Next, the milk which are refrigerated in an optimal temperature, is delivered daily with a transport, namely a tanker to Dairy.
In the subsequent stage, the milk which is arrived at Dairy, is utilized to prepare cheese, cream, and butter, and also the milk is pasteurized and packaged in special recipients. Finally, the milk and associated products are delivered to supermarkets and shops, where is putted for sale.
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- The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today s world Use specific reasons and examples to support your opini 95
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7893129381 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6435533212 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208418491546 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102941262966 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653384988696 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129921111715 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448526396951 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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