you have been seen an advertiement looking for volunteer to teach english
overseas.
write to recuitment officer.
tell them where you saw advertisement
explain why you would like to go
describe the skills that you have that you think wpuld help
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am John,dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle with regard to the job of volunteer teacher at abroad as advertised in New York Times.
I am planning to shift permanently to Canada in the following year, therefore this volunteer experience would help me in exploring about the cosmopolitan culture of Canada. Being a tutor would be impeccable measure to mingle up with the people of diverse culture, get rid of culture shock and imitate their traditions. Furthermore, this volunteer teaching would enhance the value of my resume as Canadian employers always look for those candidates who have been indulged in any kind of social work.
As I have been working as an English teacher since 2011 in a college, thus I think I have versatile experience which would be conductive in teaching. I am a native speaker, hence I have comprehensive knowledge about the English as well as American accent which would would work as a wonder while imparting education to learners.
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dweller
Dear Sir or Madam, I am John,dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, pennin...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...n,dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle with regard ...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n this epistle with regard to the job of volunteer teacher at abroad as advertise...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am planning to shift permanently to Canada in the following year, therefore ...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his volunteer teaching would enhance the value of my resume as Canadian employers...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: would
...nglish as well as American accent which would would work as a wonder while imparting educat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, i think, kind of, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14364640884 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84129417626 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2054685057 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 4.34317383033 311% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146320089909 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588107982218 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515594238194 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756400170159 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500826137411 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.