In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that there are economic crises in many countries today, so it would be better if each country refused to help other countries and focused on solving its own problems. Yet I totally disagree with the following statement, although this trend has some benefits, I would argue that there are more drawbacks for countries.
On the one hand, nowadays three-quarters countries of the world have a large number of harmful problems and they had better solve their own conundrums than facilitating for other countries as I see there has some positive sides. It is worth considering that countries expend much money for their industry for the purpose that they are supposed to build it again and it must be elevated. On top of that governments encourage population of this country in order to become more resolute, because economy rise and fall erratically and it cannot produce some incomes for society. As to why, they should advocate for resolving this preoccupations and try to work hard all day long in their work pleases. Finally governments ought to abbreviate the salary of their employees and working hours need to be significantly increased to overcome the economic crisis.
On the other hand, states should support as well as settle their own problems and I believe there are more drawbacks. Firstly countries may be loose their reputation in the between other states and it is rather detrimental for them. That is why countries ought to spend little money or necessary raw materials with motivational help. What is more, if they do not help for each them, they will agonize in the near future get integral supporter from some overseas country. Last but not list, they are not able to find ally and their industry will be dwindle considerable.
All things considered it can be concluded that it has both positive and negative sides. That is why governments should know what to do or what not to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, as to, as well as, what is more, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66476669872 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2651495224 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359609108591 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1093995264 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109993519104 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219191814619 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101101664809 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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