You began working in a new company.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
– explain why you resigned from your previous job
– describe your new work
– tell him / her other updates regarding your life
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter find you in a radiant of health and the best of spirit. It has been ages that I las saw you. I am writing this letter to tell you that I finally have quitted my old job.
As I said in our last gathering, I had been so fed up with my last job since it was about five years that I had been working there. Besides, we have a problem with our last home which was very cramped so we had to move a new house which has more bedrooms and a more spacious living room. Fortunately, we could do it by taking a superb mortgage from a local bank. The new house is faraway from my last workplace. It took me three hours for commuting so that I had be always stocked behind the traffic congestion and when I has arrived home, I had not had enough time and energy to enjoy the company’s my loved ones.
The happy point is that my new job is as same as my dream job and now I am working as a data analyst. It is about two years ago that I had participated in an online course about data analyst. From that time, I have been becoming interested and passionate for this career. Moreover, I don’t have any concern about the traffic jam and rush hours due to my new workplace is in a walking distance of my house.
On the last thing, I want to say that the new house has a big balcony which overlooks at a nice jungle so you are more than welcome to come to have dinner with us. Does next weekend for you? I am catching up to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Sahar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'had' and 'be'.
Suggestion: had always be
... me three hours for commuting so that I had be always stocked behind the traffic congestion a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...three hours for commuting so that I had be always stocked behind the traffic conge...
^^
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ehind the traffic congestion and when I has arrived home, I had not had enough time...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02702702703 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19787856744 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0978646395 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149697679308 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596396949107 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04968051403 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114260842565 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630295163677 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.09 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.