Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Generally cultural diversities are more obvious when people travel to different areas. There is a debatable matter whether tourists should obey from local traditions or not. From my perspective compelling tourists to come behind party-giver’s traditions is unfair and also illogical.
One the one hand, some people hold the opinion that the cultural traditions of host country should be enforced by visitors. They justify their notion that old-time culture has evolved over thousands of years so in order to revere our ancestors there should be a rule that makes tourist have to accordance with traditions of destiny country. Besides, they think that the best way to make their culture be become popular and familiar in the world is that tourist follow them. For instance, in my last trip I found out a rural area in the outskirt of Kashan where you would not be allowed to visit if you did not wear their local customs.
On the other hands, there are some people who think party-giver’s country should honor to visitor’s ideas due to several reasons. Firstly, the cultural variety makes our world be more beautiful and meaningful. To dig a little deeper, the geographical boarders will be futility when two groups of people with different cultures, customs and behaviors communicate and relax in companies of each other. Secondly, some of traditions may bothers visitors. According to statistics these inconvenient and unpleasant situations could cause a significant reduction in tourist attraction such as the rule of putting on scarf in my country. The last but not least, as a contradiction of sort, one of the national obligations of each citizen in each country is to introduce their tradition and culture in the best way with his perfect behavior such as superb hospitality rather than forcing visitors to conform their traditions with bias.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it is the right time to fight against the old-time belief that all the world should obey my tradition and we should revere to traditional diversity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the traditions') or simply say ''some traditions''.
Suggestion: some of the traditions; some traditions
...x in companies of each other. Secondly, some of traditions may bothers visitors. According to stat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11641791045 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80767810833 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564179104478 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5982085549 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229685345516 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825496215012 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776754318286 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128804006055 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506351565207 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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