Humanbeing have been gone through different phases in their life. In any time people and their family had different options. I think nowadays young people are much more independent than before.
First, young childeren were in charge of their family business and they did not have enough choices if they did not want to pursue their family career. and the rules were not in their favor. For instance for a person whose family were farmer being something else was very difficult. Nowadays, young people are more choices and are more independent. The family just support their youngs therefore we can see that people move far or immigrate to pursue their dream. In the past it was impossible for many people to take care of their business and family without their young and so their young were dependent to their family business.
Also, people are more educated nowadays and they learn from childhood. Internet and technology made the spread of knowlege in the world so fast that young people can learn and underestand their desires and options much easier. They need to make their own choice and be responsible for that. In the past it was different. parents were in charge of their young marriage and career. even in some families young did not have any power for making big decisions like marriage for themselves. nowadays, not only youngs choose with whom they want to marry or live, but also pursue their dreams independently.
Lastly, in the past information transfer and access to that was not easy. younges were supposed to find their role modle from their family or their small community. nowadays information transfers very fast and people have access to many resources for receiving advice. lots of different consultants are available from educational to marriatal to relationship and vocational. expert advise is taking place of parent interferance in youngs' lives.
In conclusion, young people are more independent than before and they live on their own and are responsible for their own decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04204204204 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50158621864 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5218433451 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3181818182 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1363636364 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68181818182 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362918729637 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120722004083 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736456567443 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241518157292 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594082295652 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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