Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged.
In your letter, you should say:
• Details of how you won the prize
• What the prize you are going to get
• What actions you expect to be taken
Dear Sir,
My name is Gopi and I am the winner of general knowledge puzzle program published in your paper on 2nd April 2020. Last week, I had received acknowledgement letter from your marketing division manager Mr.Murali, he mentioned that I won a gift voucher worth Rs.10,000 and it valid is till 31 April 2020. This voucher can be redeem in the Amazon and it is non-transferrable.
I am aware of that as per the terms and conditions mentioned, I am supposed to share the ID proof like PAN card copy, Voter ID to claim the voucher. I am herby attaching the required document along this letter.
I would request your marketing team to share this voucher via courier at my residential address (as per the address proof submitted) as I will be in the travelling and will not come and collect as personally it from your office.
I would request your marketing team to seal the package as confidential when they courier the voucher. Also, if you request the courier firm to hand over the voucher only to me. Please ask the courier firm to call personally, if required.
If I can be of further assistance, please conduct to my mobile number and it is “+91 7667106398”.
Thanks and faithfully
E.N.Gopi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Murali
...from your marketing division manager Mr.Murali, he mentioned that I won a gift voucher...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...1 April 2020. This voucher can be redeem in the Amazon and it is non-transferrabl...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... required document along this letter. I would request your marketing team to sh...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ect as personally it from your office. I would request your marketing team to se...
^
Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...“+91 7667106398”. Thanks and faithfully E.N.Gopi
^^^^^
Line 8, column 5, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Gopi
...106398”. Thanks and faithfully E.N.Gopi
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70283018868 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84800602272 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1879961299 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981854618833 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345639925729 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287477827375 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0395439508907 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253637758659 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.