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Would you prefer to take a part-time course or have a part-time job during your summer vacation? Use details and examples to support your explanation.
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Not only because it will gives students experience, but also they will earn money that will help them
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
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No. of Words: 401 while No. of Different Words: 173
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 1671 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.167 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.461 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.04 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.618 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.64 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.462 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5