Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phone in our daily lives
The use of mobile phone today is becoming increasingly widespread among the people regardless of all age limits. Therefore, it has been promptly a contributing factor in the improvement and assistance of human lifestyle, but also has certain harmful impacts.
There is amble evidence to suggest that mobile phone has many benefits, especially in constant communication between each other. Mobile phone has made calling, messaging, and video calling as real-time events. It has also been great importance during emergency situations. For example, in cases of unexpected conditions, you use mobile phone to call an ambulance or security forces. Moreover, it is also a powerful learning tool for students. Students can find any information, knowledge from the online world if the network connectivity is available. Similarly, mobile phone is source of unlimited entertainment. It has full of amazing entertainment features like online articles, social medias, and video games.
Viewed from different sides, mobile phone is not always an advantageous device. People will become distracted and addicted to it if their usage frequently does not diminish. It often linked to depression, anxiety, and mental disorders because people always stick their eyes on mobile phone's screen. According to statistics, the negative effects of mobile phone on real interactions are also a serious issue. People are more engrossed with their mobile phone rather than with physical surroundings. Furthermore, many people use mobile phone every day, it is wastage of time and energy. That is really matter when someone spends too much time to do insignificant things on their mobile phone.
Although mobile phone has made human's life easier, it also has downside effects on people. The conclusion is that people may not be able to live without it, but they can take control to reduce the negative impacts.
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- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using Facebook as a means of online instruction You may compare with other tools like zoom etc Relevant examples of your own experience can be included 89
- In the past most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else Nowadays most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small commun 78
- Task 1 11
- Task2 Today more people are travelling than ever before Why is this the case What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler 80
- Test 1 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, similarly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41156462585 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85715298022 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1264140093 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.7368421053 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278093572731 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883711780672 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677771225433 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154795082258 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572298751122 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.