At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is said that in recent years, young individuals have made up a large proportion of the population in many nations. While there are some drawbacks in the increasing numbers of young people compared to the old ones, I believe that the individual and economic benefits outweigh them.
On the one hand, countries with a large population of young adults may experience some problems related to employment. If loads of people leave schools and universities at the same time, there will be intense competition for jobs. The oversupply of labor can lead to poorer working conditions because employers realize that they can bring the wages down and exploit the young workers. This situation becomes worse when old workers who have been made redundant or have semi-retired are actively seeking a job, and some employers decide to choose applicants based on their work experiences. This condition can increase unemployment among young people. As a result, many well-qualified young individuals decide to migrate to other countries in search of work, which is not a desirable outcome for a country.
On the other hand, the growing number of young people can have many benefits for countries. From an economic perspective, young people are healthier and they have many years of work ahead of them; therefore, the government can gain more tax in size and use it for improvement of public services, such as the education system, hospitals, and transports. Also, young workers are more likely to experience and learn new technologies to keep up with their rivals in foreign countries, which can not only help the economy of a country but also let companies make more profits. From an individual point of view, young adults are more vibrant and have more creative and innovative ideas, which can help the progress of countries. Also, such workers have more energy to keep themselves healthy and not to be a financial burden to their countries. Such individuals are independent and can handle their work alone.
In conclusion, in my view, despite the existence of some problems related to increasing numbers of young adults, I believe having a young population brings more benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11516853933 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77763825415 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522471910112 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6540357807 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236981120293 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899237458364 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782077964368 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172653259094 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536542936136 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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