Going to university is key to success
After graduating high school, many students have difficulty in making their decision between continuing to go to unniversity and getting a job. Some students think that having a job after high school is the best way to success in life. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that going to university brings students the better opportunity to get success.
Firstly, going to university helps us widen knowledge for our future careers. In fact, we can learn valuable lessons from our professors who have a wide knowledge and a lot of experience. Moreover, some information that relate to the knowledge of subject can be shared and exchanged each other by our peers and this makes us gain useful knowledge.
Secondly, having exciting experience is what we can receive from going to university. Through educationl environment, we can easily develop soft skills like teamwork, public speaking and so on. These skills are extremely essential and useful for our future career.
Finally, getting a university degree is the best way to find a well-paid job. In reality, when the owner want to recruit any position, they always expect that applicants must have enough professional knowledge to work effectively. As a result, a university degree is very necessary to have a good salary.
In conclusion, expanding our knowledge, getting some exciting experience and finding a high salary are three beneficial sides from going to university. Therefore, I strongly believe that going to university is key to achieve success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29460580913 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90974049746 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593360995851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3076407183 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280880564686 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1112023513 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154170338919 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155890065332 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119803032476 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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