Dear Sheela,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the troubles faced by me due to the ongoing barking from the dog in your house.
As you know, I am your nearby resident. I have a very hectic desk job. Even sometimes, I do official work from my house. Unfortunately, due to barking of your dog it is very difficult for me to concentrate on my work. Thus, it not affects my professional work but also impairs my health due to disturbance creates especially at night.
I would like to request if there is anything you can do to reduce the barking. For instance by changing it’s sitting position and finding the reason behind his over barking.
I am not writing the letter to disrespect and offend you. I am just wondering if you could help me in sorting this problem. As, we have a wonderful relation from long time.
Please let me know, if I can be your assistance in this matter and your swiftly cooperation will be appreciated .
Thanks,
Yours sincerely,
Gurjeet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for me to concentrate on my work. Thus, it not affects my professional work but ...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: IT_IS[21]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...e the barking. For instance by changing it’s sitting position and finding the reason...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... could help me in sorting this problem. As, we have a wonderful relations from lon...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relation'?
Suggestion: relation
...g this problem. As, we have a wonderful relations from long time. Please let me know, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s from long time. Please let me know, if I can be your assistance in this matt...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... swiftly cooperation will be appreciated . Thanks Yours sincerely , Gurjeet...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...appreciated . Thanks Yours sincerely , Gurjeet Kaur
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nks Yours sincerely , Gurjeet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, even so, for instance, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6875 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69445722454 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6911312006 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4615384615 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315261907038 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104954087567 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946891427343 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162533981987 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079907761801 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.