Some people think that giving aids to the poor countries has more negative impacts than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that providing financial supports to the destitute countries has many adverse effects than beneficial ones. However, I opine that there are more benefits to it. In the following paragraphs, my opinion will be substantiated with example.
As every garden has weeds so as funding to the underdeveloped countries has also disadvantaged. Firstly, it would lead those countries towards over-dependency on the rich countries and may stop them from making their own efforts. Therefore, such help will hinder the long term progress of deprived countries. For instance, Pakistan is completely relying on the financial assistance of developed countries such as America, China, and Russia, etc. which has obstructed the development of the country as compelled it to be reliant on them. Secondly, the financial relief given by the developed countries may go into corrupt hands and not reach those for whom it was meant for. Then, such assistance may not serve the purpose. For example, the need for the public may be food and clothes but the money is used for building a bridge or something like that which may not satisfy the requirement of people.
There are manifold advantages in helping underprivileged countries. We all know that all countries belong to a small global village and all problems which arise due to poverty such as crime, diseases, and terrorism may affect directly or indirectly to the rich countries. So, affluent countries are assisting to the less developed countries to save them from negative repercussions by saving them from it they are actually saving themselves. To exemplify it, America is financially supporting all the developing countries across the globe to fight with Novel Corona Virus Disease by doing that actually America is helping itself. So, it can be said that it is the necessity of affluent countries to save poor countries in order to save them.
To recapitulate it, Developed countries must help underdeveloped countries however, the rich country must do know what kind of help is required most.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22658610272 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92143296764 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558912386707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3327068407 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133854396513 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442326588392 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419946568444 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097454441254 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299257757173 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.