The report aims to provide information about cement production progress along with the process used for manufacturing concrete for construction, the proper amount of ingredients is mentioned within the diagram.
Overall, there are said to be two main stages. For the first one, the first two substrates, limestone and clay, are added with heat to make cement, while the second figure shows the proper quantity of mixtures for making best-quality concrete.
The first figure depicts how to manufacture cement. Firstly, powder limestone and clay in a crushing machine and combine them in a steel mixer. The mixed powder is then heated inside a rotating tube. After that, deliver the heated mixture to a grinder. Finally, seal the fine cement in transport packaging.
Focusing on the second figure, describing steps and equipment for concrete-mixing progress, the concrete is created. Small construction gravel accounts for half amount of the ingredients, 25% of it is sand with another 15% of fine-grinded cement and the remaining is water. Those compositions are poured into a prepared mixer for concrete production.
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- The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91627943008 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.1687485321 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3636363636 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296247843232 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895006494198 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818539948038 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16703458358 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594715501253 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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