A letter sends to me in the future
Dear future version of me,
I'm writing to you, Pha, twenty years in the future. How have you been lately?
I hope it will be not a too-long letter that you, a person may be busier than me now, can take a piece of time to read it and remember what you vowed to yourself and all the effort you put in. However, I am not writing to convince you of anything, even expect a response letter, I just hope this letter will be useful advice, another available direction whenever you get lost in your life and remind that you and I are quite self-aware and very cognizant of our strengths, weaknesses.
2019 was one of the most particularly wonderful years of our lives to bear in mind. This was our second year in university, which we have gradually reached our interest in translation. We found the art and our sensitivity in it. We also found it considerably difficult at the beginning of this process. We lost in the dictionary for hours to look up the appropriate meaning of words, but it's like our invention when the word came out and it motivated us not to give up our desire. By this way, I planned to read more book, enrich our knowledge and improve our long term memory for you to show in the future. The second thing that I want to remind you of any single time in your life is the moment you got your first job as a Teaching Assistant. The moment that we decided to go outside the box and experience new things. Meanwhile, the first part-time job we applied is not our major and the salary is not so much to mention, but it has brought us a great deal of soft skill. We learnt how to manage our time effectively through arriving workplace on time, we had a chance to experience the working environment where there are seniors that always follow, control our working behaviour or even our common behaviour and sometimes they provide us with useful advice that helps us become a better version.
Eventually, I'm hoping you're much further along in this process than me, but I'm going to start by acknowledging it. I feel its edges and can see its depth. I hope you feel like you've overcome the storm in ways you didn't think possible and are surprising those around you with your limitless nature.
Love,
Past me.
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| 2020-04-29 | Lê Đoàn Anh Pha | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: I'm
Dear future version of me, Im writing to you, Pha, twenty years in th...
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...anything, even expect a response letter, I just hope this letter will be useful a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...icult at the beginning of this process. We lost in the dictionary for hours to loo...
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...become a better version. Eventually, Im hoping youre much further along in this...
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...etter version. Eventually, Im hoping youre much further along in this process than...
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...ther along in this process than me, but Im going to start by acknowledging it. I f...
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...an see its depth. I hope you feel like youve overcome the storm in ways you didnt th...
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...ke youve overcome the storm in ways you didnt think possible and are surprising those...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, while, i feel, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 24.0651302605 328% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45343137255 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45861433696 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563725490196 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.3058321141 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858208617397 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332994489143 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594475135342 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966097599865 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12663107598 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.