The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mai features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the number of guests to Ashdown Museum whille the pie chart demonstrate the proportion of visitors how comfortable with the place they come during the year before and after the year it was redecorated.
Overall, the number of travellers to Ashdown Museum increased after it was refurbished and the percentage of people fell sastisfied during the year after redecorated was highest.
In the years Ashdown Museum not refurbished yet, the number of visitors come to was just 74,000. According to the survey, the figure for tourists feel dissatisfied was biggest with 40% which was 10% higher than the rate of travellers feel sastisfied during the time before redecorated. In comparision with the proportion of visitors extremely sastisfied, very dissastisfied and no response in the year before it decoration was low rates with 15%, 10% and 5% respectively.
After refubishment, the percentage of people feel sastisfied went up with 40% and that for visitors was very sastisfied also growth significantly at 35%. There was a remarkable decrese in the figure for visitors feel uncomfortabled after Ashdown Museum refurbished from 40% to 15% and that for people was very dissatisfied declined mildly at 5% lower. It was no change in the number of visitors had no answer for the changed of Ashdown Museum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21962616822 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99943585111 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453271028037 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7561099181 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.625 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378046249713 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200308368128 0.103423049105 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101439068187 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282291407266 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868333325896 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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