In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.
What are causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem
It is an irrefutable fact that traffic has become a major issue in most of the areas, which causes lots of
problems like noise and air pollution. This essay intends to discuss the reasons of traffic and what can be
done to overcome this difficulty.
To commence with, there are lot of reasons of increasing number of vehicles and the most conspicuous
one is unreliability of public transport. In addition, the condition of public transport is very poor and
people do not want to commute in public busses and trains. Secondly, people nowadays want to flaunt
themselves in front of others and they think having a car is a best way to show off. Moreover,
infrastructure is also one of the major reason for increasing number of traffic, for instance, according to
an article in the newspaper The Tribune in July 2019, in Delhi most of the traffic jams happens due to
lack of bridges and worse condition of roads.
Moving further, as this is a major issue ant it cannot reduce dramatically, but there are some solutions
to overcome this problem. Firstly, government should increase the transport facility and encourage
individuals to use this service. Apart from this, government should also improve the condition of roads
and construct bridges where it is necessary so that people will not suffer with accidents and traffic. Last
but not the least, people should use bicycles for travelling for short distances which not only reduce the
traffic and pollution but make them healthy also. For example, according to a survey conducted by
Cambridge University in March 2018, more than 50% of traffic has been reduced due to increasing
number of people using bicycles.
To put it in a nutshell I pen down saying that, if there is a lock there is a key likewise if there is a problem
there is a solution as well. One must know the reason of the problem and try to eradicate the cause.
According to both the paragraphs, there are lots of causes of traffic but it can be resolved with the joint
efforts of both people and government.
- One way to solve the problem of congestion on roads is to increase the tax on private vehicles How could this alleviate this congestion What are the measures can you suggest to deal with congestion in the cities 61
- In some cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem What are causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem 73
- Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the youngsters Why do you think is that Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities 73
- The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities What problems do over population in city cause How can these problems be solved 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 16, column 45, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85511363636 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65455706868 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2762662733 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.071428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206826790783 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753589959025 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811465007544 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562447036951 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720781540918 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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