You are preparing an outdoor event. Write a letter to your friend to ask for help with the arrangements.
What the event is
Why the event will happen
How your friend can help you
Dear John,
I hope you and Jane are doing good in London?
I am just writing to request your assistance with the sporting event I'm organizing in the upcoming month.
Recently, I have given the responsibility to coordinate the annual athletic event of the company, scheduled to held in the upcoming month. It's a Marathon Race with a theme 'Run for the Environment' in which only the eligible employees of the company will participate, and the winner would get the best athlete medal as well as the cash price of one lakh rupees.
The authorities instruct the manager to organize an outdoor event that demonstrates the importance of protecting the environment. Not only this generate environmental awareness, but it would be an opportunity for the company to evaluate their employee's health. Also, from employee's perspectives, this would be a recreation day that alleviates the accumulating stress in their mind and re-energizes their bodies.
Well, undoubtedly, no one could guide me better than you in this, as you have been working as a sports coach for the last ten years. Could you help me by providing suggestions for planning the event? Surprisingly, I am planning a get-together to discuss my queries at Brew Cafe, London, tomorrow evening. Do let me know if it's final form your end.
Hope to hear from you soon!
With Regards
Kuldip
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| 2020-05-16 | Kuldeep Kumar | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...your assistance with the sporting event Im organizing in the upcoming month. Rece...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...cheduled to held in the upcoming month. Its a Marathon Race with a theme Run for th...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir mind and re-energizes their bodies. Well, undoubtedly, no one could guide me...
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear from you soon! With Regards Kuldip
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00444444444 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9540146359 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0575059383 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246287278062 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887682149822 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753624432543 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11215794191 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496190885444 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.