Some people think that the best way to stay fit is to join the gym, while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views.
People have different perspectives on the ways to stay fit. Some opine that joining the gymnasium is necessary to remain fit. Others, however, say that fitness can be achieved by doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs. In my opinion, working out in health clubs is essential to achieve fitness.
Some people say that joining fitness centers is required to obtain the desired fitness level. The reason behind it is that gyms have well-equipped facilities along with well-trained professionals which cater to the need of the individual. The coach access the fitness level of the individual, and then recommend specific work out routine as well as diet plan. Joining the gym, not only can one alleviate the stress of a person but also one can attain a good physique. Also, the motivating ambiance in the gym alleviates stress and rejuvenates the mind, which in turn is essential to stay fit. For example, a recent investigation reveals that employees of multi-national companies who regularly do work-out have less sick leaves instead do employees not active in the gym. Therefore, gyms are of utmost importance for a person to stay fit.
However, others vehemently contend that doing day-to-day activities like walking and climbing stairs is sufficient to remain fit. This is because these activities burn all the calories that a person consumes, and one can remain fit by doing them. Also, some jobs like salesmen job, loading, and unloading jobs require strenuous effort, and a person automatically achieves the required fitness level. For example, it has been observed that homemakers who do household chores have a better fitness level than the working women because these chores burn their excessive calories.
In conclusion, although there are good reasons why daily activities are sufficient to stay fit, I hold the view that fitness centers, undoubtedly, provide a conducive environment and are the best way to remain fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2126984127 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78883784543 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0468041061 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316524328428 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109951230427 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775227124003 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207702733557 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425706966042 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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