Compare or contrast shopping at stores and shopping online.
Shopping at stores and shopping online
Shopping at stores and shopping online are two ways of shopping nowadays. Shopping online is increasingly popular. It is a trend; however, It is also irreplaceable shopping at stores. There are many differences between shopping at stores and shopping online.
Time is the first difference. When shopping at stores, we spend a lot of time and energy walking around to look for what we like and compare the prices. For example, when I see a bag or dress I like, I will go to all the shops to see if I can buy it at a reasonable price. It took me a long time to compare and decide. On the other hand, shopping online is not take long time. We can easily compare the prices and look for the item in a short time, and online stores open 24 hours so we can do the shopping anytime, anywhere we like.
The second difference is risk. Shopping at stores is less risk than shopping online. Shopping at stores can check products and can see the product quality. It is also easier to return or exchange products when shopping at stores. Shopping online is more risk because we only see the product through the photos. What we receive may differ from the images we see and the product quality is not guaranteed. And of course, exchange or return is a rare occurrence.
These differences can effect each person’s shopping preferences. Shopping online is more convenient for busy people. However, if we have time, we should take a walk around and shopping at stores. This will make us more relaxed in busy life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, for example, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56296296296 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53497888942 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474074074074 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6499510788 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6666666667 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.578652737558 0.244688304435 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223592818476 0.084324248473 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196455279837 0.0667982634062 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.436641492445 0.151304729494 289% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19396595863 0.056905535591 341% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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