Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Health is a primary concern for every person irrespective of gender. usually a patient will consider several opinion before consulting a doctor. when it comes to normal day to day surgeries it wont effect people much on the contrary, in the case of complex surgeries patients will have huge research going on in case of doctors past record, his success ratio. patient having acess to doctors record of treating is soothing experience for patients. Many patients has these confusion about the quality of doctor. we live in modern era where we can't have much time to spend on things reviewing the needs which has the best quality. In general people usually look for high value hosiptals, which usually has high cost. people will be in belief that high end hosiptals will have high quality doctors. Neverthless hosiptals needs to show doctor record and let patient make decision regarding doctor he wants to choose. Surgeries are complicated procedures, having cutting edge technology to perform operations wont be enough. If doctor who does the operation is not so skilled he will end up killing patient. in view of the point hosiptals needs to give access to patient regarding doctors past records. options like this will help patients enhance trsut over there, while many opertaions fails beacuse of inner strength of pateints, these features will help to increase it. We do have a disadvantage for service, consider a situation where a new doctor did some heart sugery to a sugar patient, in the middle of operation the sugar levels got increased resulting in death of the patient.these record will be entered into the doctors track record. ultimately destroying the young doctors carrer, though it isn't his complete failure. we loose the more number of doctors and patients will stick to limited number of doctors I would like to conclude that pateint helath is the ultimate goal of the doctors. keeping a side the disadvantage of this service hosiptals has to provide them to patients. patients always worry about their life, on the otherhand these are not electronis gadgets if one fails we can buy another. one a patients sugery went wrong this may result in deadth or some serious troubles. enabling these features will help patients chances better for successful surgery or diagnostic of patient health
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Usually
...or every person irrespective of gender. usually a patient will consider several opinion...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun opinion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several opinions'.
Suggestion: several opinions
...gender. usually a patient will consider several opinion before consulting a doctor. when it com...
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Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ral opinion before consulting a doctor. when it comes to normal day to day surgeries...
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Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Patient
...doctors past record, his success ratio. patient having acess to doctors record of treat...
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Line 1, column 463, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
... experience for patients. Many patients has these confusion about the quality of do...
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Line 1, column 467, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this confusion' or 'these confusions'?
Suggestion: this confusion; these confusions
...erience for patients. Many patients has these confusion about the quality of doctor. we live in...
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Line 1, column 512, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... confusion about the quality of doctor. we live in modern era where we cant have m...
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Line 1, column 543, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... doctor. we live in modern era where we cant have much time to spend on things revie...
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Line 1, column 716, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...hosiptals, which usually has high cost. people will be in belief that high end hosipta...
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Line 1, column 1021, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y to perform operations wont be enough. If doctor who does the operation is not so...
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Line 1, column 1054, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...nough. If doctor who does the operation is not so skilled he will end up killing p...
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Line 1, column 1104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...skilled he will end up killing patient. in view of the point hosiptals needs to gi...
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Line 1, column 1199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Options
...patient regarding doctors past records. options like this will help patients enhance tr...
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Line 1, column 1643, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ultimately
... entered into the doctors track record. ultimately destroying the young doctors carrer, th...
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Line 1, column 1701, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ing the young doctors carrer, though it isnt his complete failure. we loose the more...
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Line 1, column 1728, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...r, though it isnt his complete failure. we loose the more number of doctors and pa...
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Line 1, column 1899, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keeping
...th is the ultimate goal of the doctors. keeping a side the disadvantage of this service...
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Line 1, column 1990, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Patients
...iptals has to provide them to patients. patients always worry about their life, on the o...
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Line 1, column 2113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...adgets if one fails we can buy another. one a patients sugery went wrong this may r...
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Line 1, column 2198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Enabling
...ult in deadth or some serious troubles. enabling these features will help patients chanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, regarding, so, while, as to, in general, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03133159269 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54033982477 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0783064241 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.35 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0285391871546 0.243740707755 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0111961640873 0.0831039109588 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218622104463 0.0758088955206 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0285391871546 0.150359130593 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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