do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
competition among friends usually has a negative effect on friendship.
Competition is a fundamental cause of development, there is no achievement without competition in this world. Friendship with more understanding may foster healthy competition between friends. This healthy competition in friendship will make this world to witness the wonders. Though competition among the less understood or incompatible friendship may negatively impact both individuals. In my opinion, friendships are fostered with the matching of the wavelength of both individuals in all the aspects, this leads to more understandability between the individuals. This understanding of nature will lead to healthy completion.
Firstly, friends with more apparel character will strengthen friendship also leads to development in career development. See if in the class among two friends or a group of friends, one person from that group secures higher grades. this will not impact on their friendship but it will create a competition among them next time everybody may secure better grades therefore competition among friendship is positively affecting the friendship.
Further, competition among friends will complement with higher goals. For example, among allies, if one aim to pursue an MS degree abroad then definitely it will encourage the other person in the troop to pursue masters. Even though the plan of masters is not coined in the mind, after the succession of a friend will facilitate another individual to higher goals.
Meanwhile, assume that you are good at interacting, and your one of the friend is of the reserve or shy character.this will provoke him to cultivate good interacting behaviour. This happened because of the competition. For example, I was not very good at interacting with others, but my friend Sanjeev was expertise in this particular art. Hence this provoked me to refine my knowledge in this aspect. Hence competition between me and him led to the improvement of my skillset.
Henceforth, by briefing the different outcomes of the competition, I personally disagree to the statement posed and good understandable friendship will fosters the enlightenment and development of friends. Therefore competition will positively effect the friendship in most of the cases
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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...v was expertise in this particular art. Hence this provoked me to refine my knowledge...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'foster'
Suggestion: foster
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
.... Therefore competition will positively effect the friendship in most of the cases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55621301775 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24469223966 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51775147929 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.564204868 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8421052632 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266785975473 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892358717144 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655002454737 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152353120184 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502669376089 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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