Many people are traveling to other countries. Why? It is positive or negative development?
In this day and age, most people tend to travel to different countries. From my point of view, I believe this trend has both advantages and disadvantages effects. In this essay, I will try to address the tendency’s causes and discuss its impacts.
Visiting other countries is an interest of today’s people. Firstly, it cannot be denied that everyone wants to spend their time on holiday after the working-hard period. Thanks to the development of the airplane, it takes much easier to go abroad at a suitable cost. Secondly, foreigners can discover new cultures, breathtaking scenes, which broaden our horizons. Therefore, tourism is on an unprecedented scale in modern life.
Traveling abroad has both negative and positive effects on development. On the one hand, the tourism trade is vital or some economics. It creates employment in services. Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including foods, souvenirs or accommodation for travel. Moreover, travel abroad can help people establish a relationship, which opens social communication. On top of that, it leads to the interchange of culture, food, etc. Viet Nam, for instance, a long time ago, known as the country of war. However, nowadays, Viet Nam has a step of development. It is famous for food, hospitality, or scenes.
On the other hand, tourism creates pollution and waste. The more people travel, the more trash has been released to the environment. It puts pressure on environmental protection. Besides, the number of excessive buildings such as hotels or roads will destroy natural habitats and special landscapes, which poses a threat to wildlife.
In conclusion, traveling to other countries is an inevitable trend. It can cause benefits and drawbacks either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23890784983 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99357292807 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0963829025 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7391304348 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7391304348 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82608695652 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236270663089 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537636660296 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740130195509 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112263924554 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454779713271 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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