People have different views on the amount of fresh water consumed, some people believe that they can use fresh water freely according to their needs, whereas, some individuals reckon that tightening the use of fresh water for each households is the neccesary work. Personally, I am in agreement with the latter view, even though the other one also shows some positive aspects.
Some people claim that they should be free to consume fresh water as long as they pay fee, just like other living expenses. This option is attractive for some reason. It is clear that each household have different purposes of using water. For example, some people water for business aim while others use water for life activities. Therefore, mandatory restriction on fresh water use cause uncomfortable and unconvinience to people with large demands.
On the other hand, some people have been maintained the governmental control of water use due to avoiding wasting water resource. As the result of the growth of population and economy worldwide, the demand of water consumption increased significantly. Thus, if government doesn’t take drastic measure to limiting the amount of water, a lack of water will take place seriously in the future. According to Vietnamnet online newspaper, many households in the slums do not have enough fresh water to subsist.
In my opinion, government should take an important role in preventing the shortage of fresh water by restricting the water use. Since this resource is one of the most important elements for human to exist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19521912351 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70319238888 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0024851453 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395685487501 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140724542104 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869873533472 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249964535583 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696041590209 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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