You have recently participated in a training course. Write a letter and give feedback to the organizer.
-give details about the course.
-what did you like about the course?
-give some suggestions for improvement.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard to give feedback on the IELTS Trainer certification which I have just completed from your esteemed institution.
My name is Julian Smith and I have recently completed three days training from the British Council office in Downtown. Since I intend to immigrate to Canada and I would have an employment gap when I land there, I will be spending that time in teaching the IELTS aspirants. In total there were four modules in the curriculum. Though all the subjects were interesting, the idea generation techniques were marvellous.
Besides this, the classes at your academy were attractive and motivating. The way faculties guided us regarding the writing of hypothetical example by extracting from newspapers clippings is really appreciable. As they have transformed my armature talent of writing which would further assist my students to overcome the issues.
At last, my experience of pursuing this course has been outstanding. Still, I would suggest you provide more sessions for training as it is an expensive course that could not be affordable by everyone.
I hope you will consider my suggestions.
Yours faithfully,
Julian Smith
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-06-05 | Kulpreet Kaur | 92 | view |
- Your local newspaper publish an advertisement asking people to help with environment projects in your area Write a letter to the project manager to offer your help Describe a local environmental issue that affects you Explain what would like to do to help 95
- Cambridge IELTS 14 Test I The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree 92
- Work is being done on the street where you live The noise is disturbing you Write a letter of complaint to your local council In your letter Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem 91
- You have organized to go on holiday with your friend However you must change your plans Write a letter to your friend In your letter Tell how much you are looking forward to the holiday Explain why you must change your plan Suggest an alternative arrangem 89
- News series on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words What is your opinion about this 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...papers clippings is really appreciable. As they have transformed my armature talen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, really, regarding, still, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32291666667 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9621454312 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671875 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.735950125 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1666666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176031550692 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519805847639 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581689371415 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997139950381 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638905430816 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.