Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport.
Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the world of today, people become more flexible because advances in technology and telecommunication technology, Therefore, individuals can live and work in any corner of the globe. This situation has both merits as wall demerits but definitely the merits outweigh the demerits.
To begin with, nowadays, people become more independent and they also accept live alone and create your own identity thereby spread our culture in another country. This is a positive impact on our country and improves the popularity of our nation. This is the best way to call tourists in countries and become a strong economy by foreign currency. For example, Canada is the best country for working so people often work there and share information about there own country. This is possible because of technology and transportation.
Furthermore, People get more opportunities in your field and increase their net worth. As a result, people rectify their family status as well as earn respect in society. In addition, the transportation system becomes more chip and available in every country. Therefor reason, some students archive the best education in abroad. Moreover, a person often finds a great job throughout the world and looking the best accommodation for her life via communication. What is more, Businessperson develops its company in various countries. This is the best benefit of communication and the fastest transportation.
In conclusion, I pen down and saying that, these aspects are more helpful in our day to day life and this situation is more a born than a bane.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
... work there and share information about there own country. This is possible because of te...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more born'?
Suggestion: a more born
...r day to day life and this situation is more a born than a bane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0192195774 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0789258278 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227716854977 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706474787816 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625226600854 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127689735512 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793966257141 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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