Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of
communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh
the disadvantages?
It is irrefutable that because of the advances in telecommunication technology and travel,
today’s person can live and work in any part of the globe. The advantages of this definitely
outweigh the disadvantages. In the following paragraphs I shall put forth my arguments to
support my views.
There are many advantages of being able to live and work from anywhere. First of all,
people have more choices of jobs because of technological advances. Not only can you work
in any part of your home country, you can work for any company in any part of the world by
telecommuting. Secondly, modern wireless technology has made work easier and created
more time for self and family. What is more, people can lessen their work hours and still do
their work more efficiently. Another advantage is that people can manage more than one
work at a time. This is the need of the day as inflation is touching the sky and people need
to earn more and more.
Furthermore, the modern transportation modes like the metro and light rail have lessened
the travel time and also made it more convenient for commuters. This has also decreased
the need for people to live in the cities to do jobs because now it is possible to work in cities
and come back to peaceful countryside in the evenings because of modern transport
systems. This has decreased the overcrowding of cities which was making cities unbearable
to live in.
On the downside, this is leading to a sedentary lifestyle as people don’t need to travel.
Another disadvantage is that people become so dependent on technology that any network
failure may lead life to come to a standstill. Nevertheless, I still believe that these minor
disadvantages are of no importance if we look at the plethora of advantages this situation
has to offer.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people can live and work anywhere today and
this situation is more of a boon than a bane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, as to, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84490808008 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494047619048 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6832615302 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3529411765 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368194677919 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120482046871 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674044267756 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10339648482 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072147428014 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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