Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary era, the lifestyle of being autonomous is becoming widespread throughout every society, especially the development countries. Whether the youth should be independent or not, nowadays, is a controversial issue playing a "future-shaping" role in the life of every young individual. As of as being independence is concerned, some are of the opinion that the young's parents should oversee and help them for taking their vital decisions, while other hold exactly opposite idea. I, personally, subscribe to the latter viewpoint, thereby believing that it is more beneficial for these peers to decide their important decisions self-sufficiently; the reasons for which I agree so are elaborated upon hereunder.
The first remarkable fact coming to mind is that this state-of-the-art approach definitely helps the young to find their favorable and fabulous way of life in an appropriate manner. Although it is highly possible to make numerous incorrect decisions, eventually it leads them to be a perfect decision-maker for their own life. An astute proverb can be a cornerstone of my argument, saying that " every man is the architect of his own destiny" - that is - the youth can pave the best way for their flourishing life by themselves rather than their parents. As a concluding remark on this issue, the more parents entitle their young children to live independently, the more experienced they will acquire, either triumphs or failures, culminating in being a mature sturdy man ready for dealing with any kind of pitfalls and obstacles.
Another noteworthy reason supporting my idea is that, by the growth of hectic and complicated life, parents, themselves, tend to work from dawn to dusk and usually find less time in order to allocate to their children. In other words, it can bring about a kind of mutual benefit for both parents and young children if the youth are given permission to make their decisions single-handedly. My personal experience is a compelling reason of this issue; my parents were always worried about my future and my destiny, whereas they were entirely busy engaging in their works, and it also adversely affected their own activities. Having successfully taken my entrance exam for university, I talked to them for several hours convincing them to give more importance to their work instead of me, and that I have my own criteria for choosing my desirable university. Afterwards, when they watched my great breakthrough and unbelievable performance in my university, they trusted on me for the rest of my key decisions, and simultaneously I watched them happier and more energetic due to the fact that they gave up their concerns about my future.
To sum up, with all this taken into account, there is no doubt that it is more informative for young children to become more independent, compared to preceding generations, on the grounds that not only do young children find their most suitable way of their living and evolution, but parents also can eliminate the concerns of allocating their sparse time to their children. It is anticipated that, in near future, this kind of instructive insight dominates the whole world, resulting in allowing children to grow up autonomously.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reasons and examples to su 83
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...adays, is a controversial issue playing a 'future-shaping' role in the ...
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Line 1, column 603, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...elieving that it is more beneficial for this peers to decide their important decisio...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate manner" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...heir favorable and fabulous way of life in an appropriate manner. Although it is highly possible to make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, whereas, while, kind of, no doubt, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2730.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22988505747 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19840496201 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 851.4 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0444279957 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.0 100.406767564 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26037986674 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971433132479 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651691526965 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167053268028 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02004308396 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 11.7677419355 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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