Wealthy nation help poorer countries with humanitarian relief in natural disaster. Do you agree or disagree?
natural disasters for instance Forest burning are being happen unusual times. many lifes including animal lifes are gone without any reson in such natural disaster. wealthy countries should help poorer nations through suggestion about care guidline. I think everyone have right to leave and Humanity can survive in such situation by wealthy nations countribution toward poorer nations.
In General, natural disasters happens in every country at non prediction time. Economically strong country come out from such kind of situation quickly but poorer country can't take out from this condition. Most poorer country has no enough tools to tackle this situation. this type of situation is one more step on his chest while they are facing many other probles like economy growth , equality in status, standard living. As a result, poor countries don't focus on social activity, good governence and other effective action.
It will be good to help such poorer countries by other well developing countries and provide hand to tackel this situation. wealthy nations can provided suggestion to face such kind of natural disaster and provide modern machinery to save more life. Relife money is also perform importantant role to come from this situation so poorer country can focus on main issue of country.
I am on side of wealthy nation to contribute whatevery is possible help to poorer nation to face such kind of nature disaster.
To conclude, every country can grow more through help of other nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for instance, i think, in general, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49031110921 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2416435418 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293881193689 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116613421614 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070487097521 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194155336141 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452640277661 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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