The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous government expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Governments allocate lots of money on renovating ancient architectures in many renowned cities all over the world, however, a host of people indicate that this budget should be utilized to facilitate transport systems and other infrastructure projects. From my perspective, I vehemently disagree with this statement.
Firstly, historical buildings always reflect the cultural and historical heritage of the host country. Should these structures are demolished, city dwellers may lose their cultural identity because nothing can remind people about their past. For example, the Vietnamese government has preserved the Complex of Hue Monuments, recognized by UNESCO as a public heritage to recall the citizens of the last ruling dynasty of Nguyen monarch and numerous sacrifices the past generations made to form this great country. For that reason,these constructions needed to be restored for the next generations as a useful method for them to maintain and bring into play the nation’s traditions.
Secondly, only by protecting ancient buildings will people in the present-day world keep intact classical architecture. For example, nowhere can people contemplate standard of French architecture in Vietnam instead of Notre-Dame Cathedral Basilica of Saigon. Accordingly, this place became one of the most tourist attractions and bring well- deserved reputation to the local area, therefore, it is devoted to enhancing tourism industry and bring substantial profits for the governments especially solving unemployment problem, and increasing taxes from services for foreigner visitors.
In conclusion, old structures and monuments tell us about the history and time-journey of the city. Their maintenance and preservation of authorities should be further enhanced while living in this rapidly developing society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
...form this great country. For that reason,these constructions needed to be restored for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90151515152 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11144904001 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67803030303 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9099287764 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.636363636 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182555208022 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615058569239 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417508255701 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109240720308 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443055019993 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.93 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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