Everyone must study the same national curriculum till high school.
Education is fundamental in the gowth and progess of a nation. It also plays a very important rule in the attitude and behaviour of the people of a country and also imbibes in them principles and values needed to function as a good human being. Education is a fundamental right and thus its standardization and proper disemmination is very important. Therefore, I agree with the fact that a nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they reach college.
Admission to most colleges occurs by the scores of standardized tests. In most cases, these standardized tests are designed by a central organization and taken by students of different boards who have studied different curriculums. For example; in India , the admission to colleges is based on standardized tests conducted by the Central Board of Secondary Education. India has a decentralized education system where every state has its on education board and thus its own curriculum. These state curriculums tend to be a lot easier and give the students a more visceral knowledge as compared to those studying in Central Board schools. Central board students are better equipped to take these tests. Thus causes a huge disparity in the knowledge required to take such standardized tests. A national curriculum will make sure everyone is on the same level as far as knowledge and academic content and are judged on their abilities in a fairer manner.
The world as such is changing at a very rapid speed. Staying abreast with the latest happenings and updates is essential. A decentralized education system often takes a lot of time to update their syllabus to include modern changes and findings. A centralized system changes that. Students can benifit a lot from having the latest knowledge with them by means of a centralized national curriculum which'll definitely take lesser time than having a distributed system.
Literacy is an important metric to guage the progess of a country. Different countries and within them different states have different criterias to measure literacy. The introduction of a national standard curriculum will give the authorities a definite criteria to measure the literacy since they know every person has gone through the same due process for acquiring their education. Students can also be definitively taught about things like doing one's taxes, which are often neglected in most curriculums.
Critiques might argue that the centralization of setting up the curriculum will lead to a loss of the new generation knowing about the local elements of history,language and culture. An introduction of a national curriculum doesn't necessarily mean the omission of these. The students can be educated about these in supplimental classes in addition to a standard, national curriculum. The student benefits in two ways, learning about his/her local history and culture as well as being equipped for standardized tests and other areas of academic competition
In conclusion, I support the introduction of a national curriculum until college as it opens the door to a level playing field for the students which is essential in a competitive field such as academics. It also gives them up to date knowledge which is easier to do when the curriculum is set centrally rather than in a distributed fashion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2803.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 537.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21973929236 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0319267086 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474860335196 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 904.5 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5642272212 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.807692308 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6538461538 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166177327108 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476256935747 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634387082802 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914819766559 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034035848591 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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