warming trend
The reading claims that we are experiencing a global warming and the evidence for this is clear and provides three reasons of support. In contrast, the professor states that there is no conclusive of proof and he refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the article avers that data from sophisticated instruments across the globe indicate a warming trend. However, the professor opposes this point by saying that it true that if we take all thermometers and average them, we would see that the temperature has risen, but he emphasizes that most thermometers in station are not reliable. In fact, he says that if we take only those from stations that are well maintained, specifically Europe, we will find that there is no warming trend after 1970.
Second, the article asserts that scientists have reported an alarming rate of breaks in the ice shelves of Antarctica. On the other hand, the lecturer casts doubt on this point by stating that this point is flawed and he says that it is true that ice shelves are breaking, however, the article fails to mention that there is evidence of warming and cooling in Antarctica. Actually, he argues that the cause of breaking may be unnatural and not related to the warming, so we need more study and time to approve this point.
Third, the passage posits that unbiased organizatins have considered the evidence and accepted as fact the idea that there is a warming trend. Conversely, the professor counters this point by explaining that this point is irresponsible. He states that these organizations have not wieghed the evidence carefully. He mentions that the UNEP report was published to the public before anyone examine it to sell the papers and not to inform the public.
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by saying that it true that
by saying that it is true that
and accepted as fact the idea that there is a warming trend.
and accepted as a fact that there is a warming trend.
before anyone examine it
before anyone examines it
Sentence: Third, the passage posits that unbiased organizatins have considered the evidence and accepted as fact the idea that there is a warming trend.
Error: organizatins Suggestion: organizations
Sentence: He states that these organizations have not wieghed the evidence carefully.
Error: wieghed Suggestion: weighed
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 292 250
No. of Characters: 1402 1200
No. of Different Words: 153 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.801 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.579 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.775 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.373 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4