Books are the best friend of a person. People get a lot of knowledge from the book and also live learning lessons. Nowadays, In this modern period for the educational purpose government provides different types of electrical equipment like computer, projector,DVDs internet etc. These equipments Proved most helpful to students and other all age group people. In my view, to a larger extent, I disagree with the topic, as these electronic equipments have many advantages to people. This acid will discuss some positive factors to define my view.
To begin with, there are many reasons behind providing large latest technological equipments. Firstly, government try to implement new technology for local people to educate them. For whom the who cannot able to study in the top schools and universities, Such as physically disabled people, financially difficult disable people etc. Physically disabled students who cannot attend the classes, they can they can use nearby public library. These libraries can help them and distance learning. Moreover, government provides all these equipments at very low prices so who cannot afford the higher fees of schools and universities they can easily access the libraries. To cite an example, in Ahmedabad, Gujarat, government started a public library with largest technological equipments in the year 2017, In the same year there were around 253 students got a chance to study.
Increased competition, government try to educate people of country. So In further period of time people can get knowledge about everything they want to know.Which is very beneficial for people and government. These things are represent to our nation in front of foreign tourist. All these facilities are also useful to uneducated people to educate their self and and they can get better job for their self.
Conversely, on the other side public library provides books also but the new generation not take much interest in books because of the internet, they can find everything on the internet so government provides such things instead of book.
To conclude, youngsters are the future of any country. Government change the System according to generation for the educational purposes. Which beneficial for country and people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Books are the best friend of a person. People get a lot of knowled...
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Suggestion: they can
...students who cannot attend the classes, they can they can use nearby public library. These librar...
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...e nearby public library. These libraries can help them and distance learning. Mor...
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...at, government started a public library with largest technological equipments in the year 20...
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...ducate people of country. So In further period of time people can get knowledge about everythi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, such as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35492957746 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80638883443 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6424714124 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5238095238 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142450259532 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393203429989 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453986083466 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841443162541 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686391419728 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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