Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to get more information on getting financial aid from your bank to start my new business.
My name is Sudheerkumar Motakatla, and I have been dreaming to invest in a new venture which is a computer coaching center for five years, and now I believe this would be the right time for me. As of now, there is no such institution available in my neighborhood. By opening this I can not only fulfill my long time desire but also help residents by offering a few free classes.
I have an initial capital amount, unfortunately; however, I am in dire need for further funds. I wonder if you could provide me a loan of 3 million rupees, this would be an ideal amount for me to install sophisticated equipment as well as to hire highly qualified professionals as tutors.
I would like to refund the funding in an Equated Monthly Installment approach within five to six years of period. If possible I can pay back sooner than expected.
I look forward to your prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
Sudheerkumar Reddy Motakatla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this let...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... qualified professionals as tutors. I would like to refund the funding in an ...
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Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ach within five to six years of period. If possible I can pay back sooner than exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73936170213 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86783224774 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707446808511 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3235676295 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119330859145 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470160130003 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679151180131 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625161616035 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844087871727 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.