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The correct age of enrollment in school has been taken mammoth dimension .eversense technology comes in limelight .A section of society reckon that children should enroll at school in early age while other seems differently.This essay shall elucidate both the prospective along with mu slant in ensuing segment .
First and foremost, why do children admit at academic place at beginning age.Owing to this, toddler become more social as well as knowledgeable in first stage of life.To be more precise ,they gain education at a very early age which make them more intelligent and it also help them to get success in their future .in china for instance only four year children know to handle various technical tool the reason behind this they enrolled two year old student at kindergarten and teach them to a different skill which prepare them for their future .hence early age study play essential roles in toddlers life secondly not only this they are able to settle their life at a very young age where they have surplus experience through their study it make them more bold and successful .
However ,at the age seven the toddler understand the way of life and importance of study. Vy this i means ,they take more interest and pick up quickly the academic syllabus which reduce the burden of teacher as well as the parents .moreover they also get a sufficient amount of time to play and learn social and communication skills from the family .never the less they never get success as like the early as in role students they are more up to date with the knowledge and other skills rather then elder age students.
To Recapitulate ,although ebert all toddler is admitted in school might be helpful students as they get surplus amount of time in play game yet the early as students when the life span with the knowledge which they gain in toddler age i personaly believe that early age enrollment in school is more helpful for the quick
and holistic growth of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n first stage of life.To be more precise ,they gain education at a very early age ...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... make them more intelligent and it also help them to get success in their future .in...
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...help them to get success in their future .in china for instance only four year chi...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
... behind this they enrolled two year old student at kindergarten and teach them to a dif...
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...kill which prepare them for their future .hence early age study play essential rol...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...rplus experience through their study it make them more bold and successful . Howeve...
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Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
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...life and importance of study. Vy this i means ,they take more interest and pick up qu...
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...and importance of study. Vy this i means ,they take more interest and pick up quic...
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...burden of teacher as well as the parents .moreover they also get a sufficient amou...
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...and communication skills from the family .never the less they never get success as...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...h the knowledge and other skills rather then elder age students. To Recapitulate ,a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hen elder age students. To Recapitulate ,although ebert all toddler is admitted i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84682080925 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46827371834 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552023121387 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.712845118 49.4020404114 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.4 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.2 20.7667163134 333% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285077704955 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152252991994 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621988022902 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111476871644 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917548209349 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... school has been taken mammoth dimension .eversense technology comes in limelight ...
^^
Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
....eversense technology comes in limelight .A section of society reckon that childre...
^^
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...versense technology comes in limelight .A section of society reckon that children...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...early age while other seems differently.This essay shall elucidate both the prospect...
^^^^
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e along with mu slant in ensuing segment . First and foremost, why do children ad...
^^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Owing
...dmit at academic place at beginning age.Owing to this, toddler become more social as ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...as knowledgeable in first stage of life.To be more precise ,they gain education at...
^^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n first stage of life.To be more precise ,they gain education at a very early age ...
^^
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... make them more intelligent and it also help them to get success in their future .in...
^^^^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...help them to get success in their future .in china for instance only four year chi...
^^
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
... behind this they enrolled two year old student at kindergarten and teach them to a dif...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...kill which prepare them for their future .hence early age study play essential rol...
^^
Line 5, column 741, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...rplus experience through their study it make them more bold and successful . Howeve...
^^^^
Line 5, column 775, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...dy it make them more bold and successful . However ,at the age seven the toddler ...
^^
Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...them more bold and successful . However ,at the age seven the toddler understand ...
^^
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...life and importance of study. Vy this i means ,they take more interest and pick up qu...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and importance of study. Vy this i means ,they take more interest and pick up quic...
^^
Line 6, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...burden of teacher as well as the parents .moreover they also get a sufficient amou...
^^
Line 6, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and communication skills from the family .never the less they never get success as...
^^
Line 6, column 494, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...h the knowledge and other skills rather then elder age students. To Recapitulate ,a...
^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hen elder age students. To Recapitulate ,although ebert all toddler is admitted i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84682080925 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46827371834 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552023121387 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.712845118 49.4020404114 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.4 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.2 20.7667163134 333% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.2 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285077704955 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152252991994 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621988022902 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111476871644 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917548209349 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.