Some sorts of sports are in a high level risk for participants. While people prefer to play this sort of activities that can cause their life in dangerous, but this would never be a reason to stop their adventurous. This essay will looks at the movement of the players and the advice will be given for the risk prevention.
On the one hand, some people tend to challenge their potential ability so they can make up their physical strength. Like climbing is also a dangerous sport that not only to hurt your finger, it can also crush your body if you are falling to the ground, but it can also build your muscles’ endurance. Some people are looking for stimulate through sport and they feel satisfied when play it. Car racing is one of the popular sports that extremely sport lover is enjoys the acceleration of driving.
However, the safety training and the information of the risk prevention should be introducing before practice that activity. Those sport providers should check that their participants have completed the safety training and the issue has given before letting them to play it. The personal protectoral equipment that all sport players should be wears before the operation. Such as helmet, kneepads and so on, this kind or item can help to reduce the injure if there is a unpredictable situation.
In conclusion, many people enjoy to challenge themselves and love to experience the stimulate sport. Although those high risk sport that can cause our like in dangerous, but make sure you wear the protectoral equipment and practice the safety training that can help to reduce the risk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: look
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91575091575 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59471521794 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531135531136 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8222876327 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261492162909 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100340440079 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643345845806 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152601235249 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372874034529 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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