There are several of animals live with human in this planet. While there are numerous of people believe that animals should be treated in the same ways as human, while others argue that animals is more benefit for food and medical experiment purpose. This essay will discuss on both point of view.
Most people believe that humans are the most smart and extraordinary creatures in the world and they need to obtain the high protein food for survival by eating these interior animals. For example, chickens, beef and pig are common product of food that is the regular resources for human. In addition to the medical research that human need to use animals for experiment of new medicine in order to prevent the significant impact before use it for human test.
On the other hand, People who believe that animal should have same right as humans because we all have significant impact to the earth and it is impossible that human can be survived in this planet without animals. Every single creature that has been exploited will cause other’s live of balance. For example, some of rear birds have been kill by the hunter and farmer, which will cause the insect increasing and the farm will be attack by those insect because the enemy of bird have been killed. Also, some animals have used for the virus research that will cause the virus revolution, as the result it might become a unpredictable disease to hit back to human.
In conclusion, although human need to exploited animals in term of keep their food chain and research can continued to provide its benefit for human and they also can destroy human life if we keep use them for unnecessary research and kill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this insect' or 'those insects'?
Suggestion: this insect; those insects
...creasing and the farm will be attack by those insect because the enemy of bird have been kil...
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Line 5, column 618, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...volution, as the result it might become a unpredictable disease to hit back to hu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77931034483 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27890079267 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510344827586 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8939813699 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469874260616 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176523990393 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118130259357 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295264299979 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352175664721 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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