Young people are now spending more and more time and money following fashion trends. What is your opinion? Is this a positive or negative development?
It is a widely established phenomenon that youngsters are increasingly inclined to splurge on clothing to keep themselves abreast of latest fashion trends. From my perspective, this trend has mostly negative consequences.
First and foremost, young people’s growing expenditure on fashion might act as a driving factor in stimulating overconsumption. Fashionable clothing, in most cases, often available to the public at a prohibitive cost, which may not fit the budget of the average folks. Obsession with the desire to possess a piece of designer clothing in order to appear in fashion might subsequently tempt young people into maxing out their credit cards at the expense of their daily living expenses. As a consequence, allocating a disproportionate amount of money for the sake of fashion and fashion indulgence might drive young people into losing control over their financial capabilities, and likely getting them involved in countless financial difficulties.
Another noteworthy issue caused by the given trend is that it relays a wrong message of materialism among the youth. As more and more of their counterparts are putting on luxurious and trendy clothes, the young might be under the impression that up-to-date is now institutionalized. Feeling a sense of urgency to be socially accepted by their peers, it is likely that young people would do whatever they deem necessary to conform to this newly formed norm. In the long term, this type of behavior might might condone the false idea that a person’s value should not be measured by his or her true personality, but rather by materialistic possessions.
To conclude, the youth’s tendency to keep up with fashion trends will mostly have detrimental effects on their financial stability as well as their perceptions of individual worth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
... on clothing to keep themselves abreast of latest fashion trends. From my perspective, th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: might
...In the long term, this type of behavior might might condone the false idea that a person’s ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38947368421 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14298625086 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628070175439 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6358641334 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.636363636 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212468863559 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772702086083 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495690741572 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11063483233 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389093624721 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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