You moved to a new place to attend a training course in college. Write a letter to your friend about it and say
- When and where did you move?
- Describe the course you are taking
- Why can it be beneficial to your friend?
Dear Sara,
I hope you are doing well. As I told you before, next month I am going to start my upcoming education at Victoria College. I am writing to give you some details which I thought would be useful for you.
To begin with, I should say that I moved to my college city last Sunday and it is about a week that I am living here on campus. They provide me with a large room with all facilities such as a private bathroom.
As our previous discussion, I am here to attend a new course related to my job. It is an international course that is presented by a well- known teacher with many years of experience. The college has a great reputation for material engineering and I am really excited about this valuable opportunity.
The scope of the course encompasses the latest fundamental development in coating technology and I strongly recommend you apply for this course. I am sure you can get several benefits including new information about different methods and advanced materials.
I hope this information will be some of assistance.
Best wishes,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, I hope you are doing well. As I told you...
^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll be some of assistance. Best wishes, Yalda Asgari.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73015873016 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82543645812 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.022357845 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240442167092 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078895546751 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548655005345 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116186570401 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616358271581 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.