Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through other media platforms.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Reading newspapers is a traditional way to get news of citizen but new can be updated by media in recent years ago because of the development of technology. There are many streams of thoughts over the idea that the media would be more convenient to read. In my opinion, I would argue that it is no longer to get the news due to the proliferation of online news sources.
I admit that newspapers still are the most popular among newsreaders even though we are living in a digital world. Firstly, newspapers are considered a more reliable source of information compared to other sources nowadays. This is because its information was thoroughly checked, edited, and censored prior to their publication and it always was written by professional journalists. Secondly, since newspapers have existed long before the introduction of the internet, most senior citizens have developed a habit of reading a newspaper every day, and they do not want to change this habit.
However, the internet has become an increasing dominant news source these days due to the benefits it offers, especially online news which is becoming prevalent these days. The first thing that attracts people to reading news online is its easy access and it is free and does not cost you a dime. With the widespread presence of the Internet people with portal devices, such as a smartphone, can access huge storage of news in just a few clicks. Furthermore, the environment should be saved by reading e-newspapers. This service does not need papers, ink, and large printer so the environment will be better.
In conclusion, although I do agree that printed newspapers are very popular amongst groups of people, I disagree that it is the best way to receive the news as more and more people are drawn to using the Internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...sored prior to their publication and it always was written by professional journalists. Se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93069306931 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79022166674 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0802276863 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237256477312 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745444813402 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635896962742 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135787192875 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589127012075 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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