some people says that educational success depend most of the time on having a good teachers others says that attitude of students also matter discuss both view and give your opinion

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Gone are the days when learning education was gr...
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...cation was great challenge for students.However, this attitude has undergone the sea ch...
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...hievement.While other reckon that it is depend on learners attitude.This essay shall e...
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...onally well trained with teaching skills .Owing to this, they have knowledge the t...
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...ive the strong influence to the student.The trainer teach the students according to...
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... of the students those are slow learner.To be more precise, they give them positiv...
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...to get good marks and broke the records.Dr. Abdul kalam, For instance always expre...
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... their grattitude towards their teachers for their successful life.Thus the teach...
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...eir teachers for their successful life.Thus the teachers teaching always motivate t...
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...eir teachers for their successful life.Thus the teachers teaching always motivate t...
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...e student to get higher score in acadmic . However,students own efforts also pla...
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...o get higher score in acadmic . However,students own efforts also play indispensible ro...
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... own hard work to get a high score band.Moreover learners positive attitude towards stu...
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...r score band and some loose their marks.Every success came with their own dedication,...
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...n, teachers can show them path and solve their difficulities.Success in academic ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in short, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55688622754 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30763371002 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 231.780413323 49.4020404114 469% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 371.2 106.682146367 348% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.8 20.7667163134 322% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.8 7.06120827912 408% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185481394844 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10072652115 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281695576566 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115874305151 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00603706152523 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.2 13.0946893788 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.97 50.2224549098 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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