Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Each indiviual seek entertainment after spending a hectic day at work. In the modern era, a plethora of means are available to entertain public such as movies, web series, music, concerts, sports, and so on. However, it is argued by some people that income of actors, sportsmen, singers, musicians is exorbitant. From my perspective, this opinion is absolutely credible.
Although entertainers work quite hard to earn their livelihood, their earnings are astronomically high than people employed in other occupations. The fundamental reason for this income disparity might be the inclinement of youngsters as well as adults to spend high amount of money, to watch movies, cricket/football matches or to attend live concerts, simply to relx their mind and cope from stress of their study, work or personal matters. The number of audience decides how much actors and directors of a movie, for example, would earn. Nonetheless, the society could even survive without these stars.
Instead, other professions which are responsible for well-being of the society should be paid more as compared to the entertainers. Needless to say, doctors and military officers protect their nation from unfortunate, unexpected, and detrimental attacks. To exemplify, in current pandemic situation doctors are staying far from their families to save the lives of their patients and consistently treating them putting their own lives in danger. Additionally, army officers guard their countries from terrorists and intruders. Moreover, researchers, scientists, and engineers put all their efforts to bring comfort in our lives by developing products and services.
In conclusion, it is agreeable that artists are affluent because of their highly paid profession. Also, it is necessary for jobs in medical, science, and military to have a high income since these jobs are reliable for harmony and security of a nation. Furthermore, their contribution towards a lucrative economy is considerable as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ers. The number of audience decides how much actors and directors of a movie, for ex...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...eing of the society should be paid more as compared to the entertainers. Needless ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55263157895 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0543254715 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648026315789 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7570204909 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130637037047 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419887061205 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529660208828 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783887908246 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112017953602 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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