Do you agree or disagree young people today are more independentthan in the past

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...subjects without help from their mentors ,consequently , technological innovations...
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...eers and friends from different cultures ,the youth now are able to communicate mo...
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...l effect on the youths desire to be free ,which in the long run will establish men...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in fact, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59773371105 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22564357908 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626062322946 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 88.0 20.1344086022 437% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.028454442 48.9658058833 366% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 494.0 100.406767564 492% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 88.25 20.6045352989 428% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.45110844103 440% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.5376344086 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102805335921 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590273550548 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312091688162 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590273550548 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312091688162 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.1 11.7677419355 417% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.3 58.1214874552 -45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 6.10430107527 347% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 10.1575268817 382% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 10.9000537634 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.1 8.01818996416 163% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.2 10.0537634409 370% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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