In last decades, people treat education much more important that before and nowadays parents are more enthusiastic to the success of their children in the education, therefore, teachers play more significant role in our society than before which caused them to be more appreciated and more valued by people.
To start with, in comparison to past, when teachers had to teach some determined subjects to students, today, because of the improvement of science and technology, the duties of teachers are more complicated than before. Today, teachers are well educated and well trained persons who are able to communicate properly with students. With today’s well developed education system, teachers are too professional that they know how to convey, even complicated subjects, to students to be perceptible by all of the students. However, in the past, as the lessons were too basic, children could study at homes and the presence of teachers were not very essential.
On the other hand, further than teaching different science to students, one of the most important duties of teachers is training and practicing different social skills to students. In fact, today teachers with different methods, learn children who to be more beneficial person to their society. They work with children to improve their skills to be more successful persons by improving their team working abilities, while these issues were not very important in the past.
Moreover, we can see that, as parents are very busy nowadays, talents of children could be detected by teachers in the school and all of these are precious things that teachers do.
To draw my conclusion, according to the above reasons, I am of the opinion that teachers role are more significant than before, because they have to proceed with improved technology which is developing fast, and further than issues related to science, they have to learnt different skills to students, hence teachers are more valued and appreciated against the past.
- TPO 41 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 65
- TPO31Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- TPO 53 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 32 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there s no need for the government to help them 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...jects, to students to be perceptible by all of the students. However, in the past, as the ...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...above reasons, I am of the opinion that teachers role are more significant than before, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in fact, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28125 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69976127417 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.8668093606 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.0 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227180433249 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977108992824 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469665554931 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134827938423 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446274396308 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 11.7677419355 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 10.002688172 210% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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