people don't read newspapers or watch tv news but they rely on internet for news is it positive or negative development .
Gone are the days when newspaper and television were only source of knowledge and get news.This notion has undergone the sea changes.ever since the technology took place.In this scenario peoples adhere on web news rather than newspaper or television. There are several causative reason behind this approach. This essay shall elucidates the reason along with results in ensuing segments .
First and foremost,reason why the masses more attract on internet news that owing to this, they save their money as well as time.To be more precise, it is a more convenient method. where the people have no need to spend money to purchase hard copy of newspaper and to pay heavy bills of cable channel.They also no need to worried about newspaper wait such as,when they well received and they get news.For example,on website, people can read and watch any news any time on different approachable platform such as facebook,instagram,youtube etc.Thus, they feel more convenient and it is a cheapest way to get in touch with the news.They don't like traditional method of newspaper or Television.They want to enjoy news with audio visual way which is easily available on internet and it also helpful for them to reduce wastage which produce from hard copy of newspaper.By this i mean they save the thousands of tree.Which are using to publish newspaper.Young adult doing efforts with better understand to maintain ecosystem and the reduce the waste material in the society .
However, Senior citizen always like to get new by read newspaper and watch television.As they have surplus amount of time to watch television and read newspaper.Not only this, they also unfamiliar with the technology use so they have only traditional source to receive news but also their actualy enjoy to read newspaper and watch television rather than other mode of source.Nevertheless,Olden masses are going to decline so very soon this generation may be a abolished those are rely on tv and newspaper.
Due to save time, money and trees it has a positive development hence it should be a more implement to reduce waste a on society.It might be affect the companies those are running business on newspaper.Where as they can easily adopt technology and they can do their work easily.
To recapitulate,it is vehemently voch that ,although liability on traditional newspaper and television might be beneficial for senior citizen yet Internet has more advanced method.It has various benefit which proof it is a positive development for the holistic growth of the nation .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, i mean, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19024390244 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18561629643 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.994287238 49.4020404114 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.0 106.682146367 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.125 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355432689375 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126795195537 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095566739857 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17431433581 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737609770217 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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