write a letter to a friend that you can t attend the hour weeding tell her how you feel about the wedding tell her about the gifts you got her tell her why you can t come

Essay topics:

write a letter to a friend that you can't attend the hour weeding
-tell her how you feel about the wedding
- tell her about the gifts you got her
- tell her why you can't come

Dear Devine
I hope you are good in health am writing this letter to inform you.I am apologised to say 'i will not be to attend your wedding ceremony.
I was very happy to hear the news for your marriage.Even i booked my ticket before two days because i wanted to a arrived timely.Thus i want to attend all the ceremonies of your marriage.Moreover i brought a beautiful micro oven and one tiny makeup kit for you as a gift for your marriage.I was excited for that day.
However, recently i got email from my college about my date sheet of MBA final examination and i was really surprised to saw that my final exam is on the same day when your marriage.After received this news, i felt disturbed a lot as well as my mother also upset to hear this news.As you know study is more important for my future career.My mother will definitely attend this marriage.After exam i will definitely come and try to attend your post marriage ceremonies and don't worry dear we will meet very soon.
Your friend
Jass

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... Devine I hope you are good in health am writing this letter to inform you.I am ...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...th am writing this letter to inform you.I am apologised to say i will not be to a...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...er to inform you.I am apologised to say i will not be to attend your wedding cere...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...appy to hear the news for your marriage.Even i booked my ticket before two days beca...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to hear the news for your marriage.Even i booked my ticket before two days becaus...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ooked my ticket before two days because i wanted to a arrived timely.Thus i want ...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ket before two days because i wanted to a arrived timely.Thus i want to attend al...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ys because i wanted to a arrived timely.Thus i want to attend all the ceremonies of ...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ys because i wanted to a arrived timely.Thus i want to attend all the ceremonies of ...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...cause i wanted to a arrived timely.Thus i want to attend all the ceremonies of yo...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...end all the ceremonies of your marriage.Moreover i brought a beautiful micro oven and on...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...end all the ceremonies of your marriage.Moreover i brought a beautiful micro oven and on...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he ceremonies of your marriage.Moreover i brought a beautiful micro oven and one ...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: I
...kit for you as a gift for your marriage.I was excited for that day. However, re...
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Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...cited for that day. However, recently i got email from my college about my date...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...date sheet of MBA final examination and i was really surprised to saw that my fin...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: After
...m is on the same day when your marriage.After received this news, i felt disturbed a ...
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Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...your marriage.After received this news, i felt disturbed a lot as well as my moth...
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Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: As
... my mother also upset to hear this news.As you know study is more important for my...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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... is more important for my future career.My mother will definitely attend this marr...
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Line 4, column 386, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: After
...er will definitely attend this marriage.After exam i will definitely come and try to ...
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Line 4, column 397, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...initely attend this marriage.After exam i will definitely come and try to attend ...
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Line 4, column 472, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ttend your post marriage ceremonies and dont worry dear we will meet very soon. You...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear we will meet very soon. Your friend Jass
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, you know, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48633879781 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74498666212 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 16.3608247423 275% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.235582882 44.8134815571 411% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.25 76.5299724578 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.75 16.8248392259 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 4.34317383033 420% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 2.54639175258 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117284134956 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842930195663 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578467078133 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101928178456 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645672716007 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 8.37731958763 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 70.7449484536 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 7.45979381443 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.65 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 8.54432989691 234% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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