There are contrast views about paying money for arts like music or paining or public services. Some people believe that public services are more important to care about instead of wasting money for arts. I disagree with this idea because these issues are separate matters to be considered and both of them are significant enough to survey.
To begin with, arts such as music, sculpture and painting are prominent topics in many territories and universities. Besides, scientists believe that art is a treasure to inspire and motivate our soul and it has impressive effect on our mind. In addition, art is an approach to preserve costume and culture of countries and it is profitable to improve other art industries such as cinema and theatre. Therefore, this is an important subject that should be supported from government and individuals. Furthermore, Austria as an aesthetic country, after world war two its governments preferred to spread arts among people by construction of cinema, theatre and museum. Because they believe that art is a mercury to alive the people and area.
On other hand, public services are practical performances for each region that should be accomplished by government due to duty of financial support and management. Actually, educational institutions are necessary for study, hospitals and clinics for health care services and other official venues like banks and post offices are required for all types of societies. Because these are examples of welfare and services that should be constructed and these are human right to have in his/her residential place.
In conclusion, both of arts and public services are important enough to pay attention. It is a heavy burden that government should handle them with managing the budgets and precise plan for construction of public services in cities and art industries. Finally, spend currency for them is not waste of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, finally, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80186404696 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3459866653 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256798330604 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915835497155 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579775910301 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160032727439 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519695172876 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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