Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
People debate intensively about whether teachers are not valued and appreciated as is used to be. In my opinion, I agree that teachers nowadays are thought of as normal people instead of the symbol of always being right. So, I will explore two main reasons that caused this situation.
First of all, teachers in the past have salaries higher than average, however, recently lots of jobs earn
more money than teachers. Though it is not absolutely correct to judge a job with its salary, it is inevitable that people in modern society consider the more money earned, the higher is the social status. For example, my aunt and uncle are both teachers, and they deeply feel that they are not so valued by society due to their stable but not high salaries. Furthermore, they are even jealous if someone has a higher salary. In short, people don't treat them as they are someone mighty anymore because of the money they earn.
Secondly, it is due to the rapidly developing online sources that are available for all the people that cause teachers' status to decrease. Evidently, even students are capable of using their devices to search for relative information online, the importance of teachers' existence is at risk. Moreover, students will even challenge their teachers' lectures with the data obtained from online websites. For instance, I have once suggested that my teacher's knowledge about a specific topic be wrong. Although at first, she disagrees with my point of view, however, one of my classmates proved my point to be right according to some article online.
In conclusion, it is convincing to say that teachers no longer have such high social standards as that in the past. This is because of how people think about salary these days and the attainability of online information.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e has a higher salary. In short, people dont treat them as they are someone mighty a...
^^^^
Line 8, column 33, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: saying
...ine. In conclusion, it is convincing to say that teachers no longer have such high ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94370860927 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54353998038 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4159195313 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223278201372 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686965652206 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461141667796 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111575178653 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042777941072 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e has a higher salary. In short, people dont treat them as they are someone mighty a...
^^^^
Line 8, column 33, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: saying
...ine. In conclusion, it is convincing to say that teachers no longer have such high ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94370860927 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54353998038 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4159195313 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223278201372 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686965652206 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461141667796 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111575178653 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042777941072 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.