You have recently participated in a training course. Write a letter and give feedback to the organiser.
- Give details about the course.
- What did you like about the course?
- Give some suggestions for improvement.
Respected Organizer,
I am Smitesh and writing this letter to provide suggestions and opinion about the ASP.Net program training which was held on 14 to 16 Nov 2014.
There was a three days full-time training on the subject of ASP.Net MVC which is new technology introduced by giant software company Microsoft. The training contained all major topics and their use cases with organized content and slides. Apart from this, trainer has provided well documented and very useful study materials.
The trainer was highly efficient and has in-depth knowledge of the subject. The teacher has effectively delivered all course content. I really like the live demonstration of solutions of different level of problem, which are generally face during real-time work.
Here I would like to highlight the inconvenience of facilities which you provided during training. For instance, computer which we used during training was very old configuration, which consume huge time and it frustrated to user. I would suggest you to upgrade computer with new technology which smoothly runs the training program.
I hope you consider my suggestion positively.
Your Sincerely,
Smitesh
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which is new technology
which is a new technology
and their use cases with organized content and slides
and they use cases with organized content and slides
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However I would like to point out that computer which we used during training was not much efficient and has very old configuration, which consume huge time to process.
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